I wish I could think of a nicer way to say this ... but ... if you didn't have the time, perhaps you shouldn't have taken the job.
Alternatively, a progressive discussion rather than a "magazine feature" might have been a better way to deal with the subject.
I do like the writing and the pictures, and appreciate the effort to which you are going, but perhaps you're over-doing it.
Ron,
a. I didn't say I didn't have the time, I'm taking the time I have, to do it in the manner I am.
b. I'm doing it, in this format because this is the way I "choose" to do it, and in the end...... will do the subject justice.
I "Choose" to get all the information out first in the "magazine style" in order to give the discussion more substance and visual clarity.
c. If you think I'm going into too much detail, you could "choose" not to read it, and I say that politely.
d. Now having said the above, I "choose" not to respond this any more and just focus on the writing at hand.
thank you,
Roger
......and in postscript, this is a forum and everybody is not going to be happy all the time. All I could do is follow my gut.